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kyatty2007 wrote:OMG yes, the wings! That description of them in the bath and when Mara rakes her hands down his back along those ridges... *double thud*!! Seriously gave me shivers...in a good way
Also, I love the part about the eyes. I think eyes that "light up"/glow is becoming a staple for Jeaniene. I love that idea!!
. So is this where we start begging the EA for more of him and this world?!?!



drea268 wrote:As for Raphael well. So is this where we start begging the EA for more of him and this world?!?!
wonttorit wrote:LOL! drea! I've been not-so-subtly hinting about more Mara and Raphael already. Holy shit! When his wings spread out when they were making love!!! Whoa! That was a serious visual. The sensitive ridges, his eyes, oh yeah, J, we will need more from this world. You don't need to sleep do you J? You can fit more writing into your schedule in the next couple of years? Right?
















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